Sense Sonnet - Acher

 Metaphor Us!

I'm building castles in the air,

And with such grandeur for us two,

In times and places when and where

A perfect life we will pursue.

Any doubts will fade away, plus

You will come to praise me on this,

That my plans are the best for us,

Assuring of ongoing bliss.

I'll convince you it's worth it all.

Together, castles we can build,

High in the air, never to fall,

Where all our dreams can be fulfilled.

Oh please don't tell me with your frown,

All these castles have fallen down!